Like the focus of the poem on hautboys (high-pitched wind instruments that
in our day we might call oboes), the rhyme scheme is rather exotic in that the
ear knows repetition of certain sounds is occurring, but these similar sounds
are far enough apart in the middle of the poem to make the ear strain to
understand the sonic texture. Appropriately Sofer makes his opening line What noise is this asked by Macbeth in
Act IV, Scene 1, where Macbeth confers with three witches as hautboys sound.
What noise is this? He blinks.
Shadowy
kings appear
as the
witches’ cauldron sinks
and hautboys fill the air.
Next come
these lines that play with French words driven by the compound word hautboy where haut in French means high.
Whose are
these high woods
whose voix
are always haut
left in
the wake of gods?
The Steiny
Poet assumes the gods are the dead (shadowy) kings Macbeth sees in the dumb show while he
is consorting with the witches. So the hautboys (also referred to as the shawm) play a grim overture that ushers in the dumb show, a chorus of presumable
detractors, and Hamlet’s play The
Mousetrap. Shakespeare set his tragedies of Macbeth and Hamlet in and around
Elsinore Castle.
For Elsinore
they blow
in a grim
overture:
Dumb show.
Chorus. Mousetrap.
The shawm
enters the ear
past
hammer, anvil, stirrup—
the note
no one will heed,
ill wind
in a double reed.
So the
sound—the voices (voix)—of the hautboys (high woods) enters the ear going past
the three critical bones of the middle ear— hammer, anvil, stirrup—perhaps a warning
sound that no one pays attention to. No love poem this, as traditional sonnets
have often been, but certainly a beautifully rendered poem showing control over
the line and compression in its storytelling.
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Thanks for your kind words. Readers intrigued by "Hautboys" might also enjoy the extended dialogue between Miranda and Caliban in my poem "After the Storm." It's in my book WAVE (Main Street Rag, 2010).
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