In the tenth pairing of the Ten Buts thru Ten Comms Project reading “A Red Stamp” through
“Thou shalt not covet,” the
Steiny Road Poet waded in to cross match first identifying some words to work
with and then moving backwards through the text.
A RED STAMP.
If lilies are lily white if they exhaust noise and
distance and even dust, if they dusty will dirt a surface that has no extreme
grace, if they do this and it is not necessary it is not at all necessary if
they do this they need a catalogue.
WHAT ONE NEEDS TO LIVE VS WHAT
ONE DESIRES
Here are some words
that Steiny thought she could work with: need, not at all necessary,
if they do this and it is not necessary, lily white.
Comments from
Steiny:
“Thank G-d the word
need appeared in this Button! It gave me courage that I could find
something to talk about in this read through but once I traveled backwards
through the poem, I saw other possibilities.
“Need is a companion to desire.
“Covet means:
1. To feel blameworthy desire for (that which is
another's). See Synonyms at envy.
2. To wish for longingly. See Synonyms at desire.
Root meanings of covet
include the word Cupidus (Cupid)
[Middle
English coveiten, from Old French coveitier, from covitie, desire,
from Latin cupidits, from cupidus, desirous,
from cupere, to desire.]
“Since we Buttons
decided that we saw "A Red Stamp." as a coded love poem that hinges
on desire and physical sex, the fit for the Tenth Commandment works here.
“not at all necessary goes
hand-in-hand with being commanded not to covet. What one desires is not
necessarily what one needs to live, though in love there is no reason like
this. In the orthodoxy of religion, what Gertrude desires (i.e. Alice) is
not permissible. So Gtrude cannot put her love story out in the world
straightforwardly so creates her catalogue,
her register of marriage and troth through Tender Buttons.
“if they do this and it is not necessary
continues the discussion of a love relationship not permissible by Judaic
or Christian standards. However, one should not dismiss the repetition exacted
here. It really smacks in the thou shalt not if not the entire thou
shalt not covet command.
“lily white—means beyond reproach and this is how Gertrude
sees Alice once she falls in love with her and so Gtrude gives Alice her red
stamp of covetous attention in defiance of thou shalt not...”
IN THE VAST SEA OF
THE POSSIBLE
This concludes the close
reading of the first ten subpoems of Tender
Buttons through the Ten Commandments. This journey was often as difficult
as the first read-throughs but hopefully some new light was shed. Ellen Dillon,
thinking of all things buttonical,
offered this quote from Rachel Blau DuPlessis
as commentary on how the members of the Tender Button MOOSG— interact with
Stein’s difficult texts:
“a reverence for
textuality so intense it moves into an antic quality within the seriousness, an
exilic, nomadic sensibility, a certain kind of humor … a quarrel with the
negative space some call God, a particular, actually somewhat skeptical,
somewhat hopeful attitude to fulfillment and messianic hope.”
Dave Green provided this
response to Ellen’s offering,
“Yes, we are antic
buttonical exegetes here, not unlike the text-crazed Talmudic scholars of yore.
We are nomadic because the words we study have had their denotational links cut
and therefore we are continually sailing on a vast sea of possible meanings.
Our messages themselves cross the globe every day and night. We strengthen our
communal bonds and hold a light against the darkness via humor (we believe this
works better than buying goddamn
big cars). We question everything, as the truth is complex and elusive;
sometimes feel lost amid the vast ocean; but always remain hopeful we will
glean a measure of understanding and have fun in the process.”
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