In the seventh pairing of
the Ten Buts thru Ten Comms Project reading “Nothing Elegant.” through
“Thou shalt not commit adultery,” Steiny
approached by selecting certain words and phrases.
NOTHING ELEGANT.
A charm a single
charm is doubtful. If the red is rose and there is a gate surrounding it, if
inside is let in and there places change then certainly something is upright.
It is earnest.
Saying that this subpoem “really resonates in [her] mind on matters of
adultery,” Steiny offered a look at these words that “might help get this
strange lens started: single, a single charm is doubtful, If the red is rose and there is a gate
surrounding it, if inside is let in,
places change, certainly something is upright.
Then she offered
these comments:
“--Single
stands opposite married. Adultery is when a married person cheats on
his/her spouse.
“--Charm may
be a particular quality of personality or mannerism that attracts another
person. Usually it is no one single aspect (charm) that entices a married
person to stray.
“--One category of
adulterer frequents a "house of ill repute" (brothel). The women of a
brothel may be thought of as roses. Red is a color associated
with prostitutes as in Red Light District and generally speaking women in red
dresses are thought particularly sexy, alluring and beyond a man's capacity to
control his carnal impulses. Women in a brothel live in a gated community.
They are not free to leave often. Men who get inside such houses expect
to be given access to a sexual partner, one he can enter.
“--If a married man
falls in love with a prostitute, then he could become paradoxically a victim
seeing himself as a man of moral standing despite having broken his
marriage vows.
“Since The Buttons
read "Nothing Elegant." as a domestic scenario possibly culminating
in the unnamed object vacuum cleaner,
I think I feel pretty shocked with how well the 7th Commandment snugs with sub
poem 7.”
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